Eli_IELTS_WRITING
写作总体方向
作文提升次序，按下表，由上到下，达到一个层次，再考虑下个层次，切忌直接去提升词汇句型
| 作文 | 提高 |
|---|---|
| 主题/细节 | 不要跑题（读错题）字数 正式的 tone |
| 语法 | 不要有任何语法错误 |
| 词汇句型 | 达到一定程度才考虑 |
一定要写前列题纲：两个观点就写两段 第一段: Reason1 Reason2; 第二段：Reason1 Reason 2
图表题的描述，一定要先把数据信息分类，再描述
知识点
showcase = show/demonstrate/illustrate/display
respectively 分别的（永远后置）
三大补充逻辑
任何动词都可以加副词
任何名词都可以加形容词
任何句子都可以加介词（作状语）
否定副词提前，后面的句子主谓倒装，如果有助动词/情态动词，只需要提前情态动词
so adj./adv. that 完整句子
主语 + 定语（形容词、定语从句、非谓语动词、介词短语）+ 谓语 + 宾语
小作文
The two charts illustrate details/information about pineapple. （主语从句）What the first bar chart shows is that（这里应该是有个语法错误，that 后跟完整句子，但后面是个名词 exports，缺了谓语，改法是把 that 去掉） world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019. （形式主语）It is clear-cut that a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019 is showcased in the pie chart.
In the first chart, （There be）there is a massive/gigantic/considerable/huge/giant growth of exports of pineapple from below 2m to over 10m in country A between 2009 and 2019. （非谓语动词）Having a similar situation with A, Country C experienced a growth of pineapple exports, （插入语）which is much smaller though, in the same decade. （动名词作主语）However, exporting pineapple to the world market has been dramatically slowed from over 4m in 2009 to below 2m in 2019（这里应该再加个 in country B 作状语）.
In the second pie chart, （强调句的背景）among all of the costs of the pineapple to a consumer, （强调句）it is the distribution and retail of a pineapple that make up the highest percent with 35 percent, （定语从句）which is followed by profit and taxes with 16% and 18% respectively. Next, import licenses and international transport are 10% and 12% each. （倒装）The lowest with 4 and 5 percent are export costs and producer./Among the lowest factors in this chart are export costs and producer with about 4 and 5 percent.
大作文
第一段：主题（三句话：背景句，切题反方向，正方向）（三句话：背景句，切题反方向、正方向，主题句）
第二段：先总结优点，再分写：1. 文化/知识 + 扩展 2. 锻炼自己/放松/交朋友
第三段：缺点：危险/花费高/语言障碍
第四段：总结（注意不是升华，英文逻辑没有升华的概念）
If there is an industry that is growing extremely/unbelievably in the last decade in our society, it is definitely the traveling sector/industry that has experiece a boom for its demand. While some people argue that being a tourist in a tough environment will have numerous benefits, other people hold that there will be countless drawbacks in terms of traveling to this kind of places. In this article, the benefits and disadvantages/negatives/problems/shortcomings/downsides will be discussed/demonstrated/showcased in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, it is doubtless that traveling to a place with unknown conditions actually can provide some meaningful rewards. First, various and colorful cultures of different countries and areas can be learned/absorbed/gained （补充逻辑 1） effectively and efficiently, which will make （补充逻辑 2） diverse tourists experience unique persperctive and insights and then bring them back to their own country （补充逻辑 3） for the benefit of other people. Second/moreover/in addition, not only can people in these remote areas gain tremendous insights, but also tourists going to places where conditions are difficult will have more opportunities to build a lasting and meaningful relationship with the people they meet on the way during their trip, which could become the most valuable treasure in their life.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that planning a trip to some desolate/deserted/distant areas/regions/destinations/spots/zone will cause some troubles. To begin with, some desolate regions are so dangerous and risky that these areas could pose a great number of/countless/plenty of/numerous/a series of hazardous events to anyone who is new there. For example, in some rainforests in Brazil, which have become a hot traveling destination for more people nowadays, certain harmful and toxic plants could unexpectedly attack people to cause deadly injuries. Moreover, in terms of visiting some remote areas, there have alreaday been a lot of stories where language barriers between native people and tourists have caused serious troubles for the communication in the traveling period, which has negatively affected their traveling experience.
In conclusion, although some people believe that visiting remote and tough areas could lead to a plethora of risky and negative problems, I am fully convinced that benefits and advantages will abound during anyone's trip to some unknown but unique places.